When It Hits You In The Face
I wish I could vomit it all out!I wish that I could reach my hand down inside of meand pull out therotting poison of this decade of my debauched wantoness,(the sour taste would still remain)If only I...
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Excellent & hard-hitting like nails, now that's dark. Have you read my "Black feathers"? You might like that one.I hope you enter the splinters comp.Matt
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Thanks, that was how I was feeling at the moment I wrote it. It all came out in one thought , with just two word changes after reading it over. So, you see, I'm not really a poet, but I am always a...
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yes, this one hit me in the face, kicked me in the stomach.not much i can say apart from: thank you for your honesty, it is very much appreciated, writing dark poems like this can heal the writer and...
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sometimes i do feel that way. i knew it from the top that i can relate to this poem. it's like seeing myself when i was crazy... spooky! nilsa
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Just to say thank you for letting me share this. I read '''Dark Feathers', And '''the Reponse". I can see a dark room atmosphere in dark feather and feel the inner shatteredess of a life, and I can...
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Dear Jelapi, thanks for reading "Black Feathers" and "A Response". Yes, my poem was written quite quickly and naturally, it just had to be written after i had read "Black Feathers". It was a great...
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Hi Jelapi...checked out some of your work here too....this piece is well written and flows well. I can relate to it having been in that space myself....pretty gut wrenching stuff...in my case, turned...
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